Yes, Lydia would blame others for her own unhappiness instead of looking at her inappropriate behavior 🙄 Mary is a surprise. It will be interesting to see where this goes.
Hmm… interesting Lydia’s thoughts. I sometimes think about loved ones who are in a different home, how odd it is and imagine what the might be doing or thinking while away from me. And you captured that in Lydia’s musings.
Lydis's introspection was great. Will time help her learn to correct her behavior and avoid consequences, or will she continue to blame others for her new situation?
It made Lydia’s anger felt… untidy, somehow. Misdirected. But she pushed the thought away
Slight correction offered here. I would suggest that instead of the word 'felt' you use the word 'feel'. Or change it entirely to something like "Lydia felt that her anger was made... Untidy, somehow. "
Yes, Lydia would blame others for her own unhappiness instead of looking at her inappropriate behavior 🙄 Mary is a surprise. It will be interesting to see where this goes.
Hmm… interesting Lydia’s thoughts. I sometimes think about loved ones who are in a different home, how odd it is and imagine what the might be doing or thinking while away from me. And you captured that in Lydia’s musings.
Lydis's introspection was great. Will time help her learn to correct her behavior and avoid consequences, or will she continue to blame others for her new situation?
Correction: It made Lydia’s anger felt---feel
It made Lydia’s anger felt… untidy, somehow. Misdirected. But she pushed the thought away
Slight correction offered here. I would suggest that instead of the word 'felt' you use the word 'feel'. Or change it entirely to something like "Lydia felt that her anger was made... Untidy, somehow. "