Unavoidable Evils. What if, after returning from Hunsford, Elizabeth Bennet could no longer stay silent, especially when she realized Lydia’s trip to Brighton might ruin them all?
I love how you explore the invisible threads that tie women together across time. It made me think about what gets passed down—not just through blood, but through presence.
Excellent beginning. Elizabeth takes a difficult road and confronts her family about their behavior. I love the parents' response, especially Bennet. With Sir William he discovers the truth about Wickham and makes significant changes. Mrs. Bennet also faces some hard truths.
Great premise! I can't wait to read more!
I love how you explore the invisible threads that tie women together across time. It made me think about what gets passed down—not just through blood, but through presence.
Interesting alternative take on this classic. Great writing as well.
Finally, a story that begins with Elizabeth speaking her mind to the family. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. This is going to be great!
Excellent beginning. Elizabeth takes a difficult road and confronts her family about their behavior. I love the parents' response, especially Bennet. With Sir William he discovers the truth about Wickham and makes significant changes. Mrs. Bennet also faces some hard truths.
Wow! I love this beginning! Keep it up. A very different Lizzy. .
I am invested in this parallel reality and curious to see how it will unfold! Love your writing style too :)
Thanks! This story is going to be a longer one, so enjoy the ride.