This shattered me in a goood way. Your words pulse with emotion, fierce and unflinching, like a blade drawn in defense of something soft and sacred. Elizabeth’s defiance, her pride, that aching twist at the end and it’s the kind of storytelling that leaves a mark, the kind that makes you feel.
wow - that is a different way to show her pride. I like this version of the more combative fierce Elizabeth :)
Very captivating. I’m wondering what will happen. Looks like you wrote a part two so I will continue to read. Thank you!
This shattered me in a goood way. Your words pulse with emotion, fierce and unflinching, like a blade drawn in defense of something soft and sacred. Elizabeth’s defiance, her pride, that aching twist at the end and it’s the kind of storytelling that leaves a mark, the kind that makes you feel.
Thanks for your comment! I really wanted to explore Elizabeth’s pride and how, given the circumstances, it might shape her choices.
I’m also a huge Jane Austen fan so I made sure to hit your follow button and I’ll be sure to read more and comment. Thanks for sharing your work.