What if, after Elizabeth refused his proposal at Hunsford, Darcy didn’t storm off in pride and fury, but turned away just long enough for her to glimpse the fall of a single tear?
Interesting idea...worth expanding into a novella at least! David...it's never been done before and now that you've perked our interest, we want to read more of what you have to say now that you've started it!
I’d read a longer story based on this!
So would I!
Interesting idea...worth expanding into a novella at least! David...it's never been done before and now that you've perked our interest, we want to read more of what you have to say now that you've started it!
I would love to read a longer story with this scene in it ❤️
Wow! Fantastic start. The deep emotional insight into both characters pulled me into this story.
What can I say? I was beautiful! Especially as you show Elizabeth’s reaction without any notice to Darcy being aware of the tear. Very perfect.
What can I say? It was beautiful! Especially as you show Elizabeth’s reaction without any notice to Darcy being aware of the tear. Very perfect.
Yes, please continue.
Yes! Please! This is an amazing beginning, and I want to read more
Yes don't stop now!!
Please continue this story.